While you have managed to use the three techniques well, it is possible that you could have been more creative with your use of these techniques. For example the match-on-action shot in which Emily's character walks into the toilets could have been a bit more distinctive, as we did not notice it initially. The 180 degree rule only applied to the short conversation sequence at the end, so perhaps this conversation could have been extended if you had more time, or maybe the rule could have been used when Emily and Maddie are talking at the beginning. However despite these points, the three editing techniques have been correctly used, and your use of extended shots is quite effective at building tension.
While you have managed to use the three techniques well, it is possible that you could have been more creative with your use of these techniques. For example the match-on-action shot in which Emily's character walks into the toilets could have been a bit more distinctive, as we did not notice it initially. The 180 degree rule only applied to the short conversation sequence at the end, so perhaps this conversation could have been extended if you had more time, or maybe the rule could have been used when Emily and Maddie are talking at the beginning. However despite these points, the three editing techniques have been correctly used, and your use of extended shots is quite effective at building tension.
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